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2018-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I don not like to collect something, just i like to throw things away . But if i have a something collection, i would like to collect special clothes or shoes or not usual jewerly. Just simple but anyone don't have it. Whenever i see special jewerly or clothes that someone has it, i wonder "Where did she buy it?" Of course i don't have a confidence that i try wear them. But i want to collect rare item.

강사 첨삭

Hello BB. Thank you for the effort on answering and sending this in. I think this would be an interesting hobby. Collecting rare items for fashion would be great. If you would finally get to have that big closet you dream of, then maybe you could start with this hobby. :)

- T. Beth

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I don not like to collect something, just i like to throw things away .
>>>> I do not like to collect something. I\'d rather throw things away.  

But if i have a something collection, i would like to collect special clothes or shoes or not usual jewelry.
>>>> But if I am to collect something, I would like to collect special clothes, shoes or unique jewelries.      
Just simple but anyone don\'t have it.
>>>> Just simple things but not everyone would have.    
Whenever i see special jewerly or clothes that someone has it, i wonder \"Where did she buy it?\"
>>>>  Whenever I see special jewelries or clothes that others have, I wonder where they bought it.    
Of course i don\'t have a confidence that i try wear them.
>>>> Of course, I am not confident that I would try them. 

>>>> OR: Of course, I don\'t have the confidence to try them on.     
But i want to collect rare item.

>>>>  CORRECT. (But I want to collect rare items.)   

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