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Hello BB! Thank you once again for this. It is actually interesting to know the history of items which seem to have historical value. Some people collect old items for this reason. In some cases, they could be worth a fortune.
- T. Beth
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I think some people are intersted in collecting old items.
>>>> I think some people are interested in collecting old items.
For example, traditinal dishes, paintings so on.
>>>> For example, traditional dishes recipes, paintings and so on.
In korea, there is a TV program about someone\'s heritage things.
>>>> OR: In Korea, there is a TV program about people\'s heritages.
The program let konw whether the things are curio or not.
>>>> The program let people know whether the things are curio or not.
People submit their heritage things.
>>>> CORRECT.
There are many traditional things.
>>>> CORRECT.
And they have a confidence about their ancestor\'s things.
>>>> And there are incidences of coincidence relating to their ancestor\'s things.
I think people are intersted in things that they haven\'t experience.
>>>> I think people are intersted in things that they haven\'t experienced.
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