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2018-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I don't like to stay over at other people's house. Of course when i drunk seriously, i used to stay over at other people's house. When i got up in the moring, i feel uncomfortable every thing. This is the reason why I don't like to stay over at other people's house. First I don't have my wash tools and underwear. Second I feel sorry to house owner. But when my husband of friend's family are come to my house, they sometimes stay over at my home. I don't care that. Because this is my home.

강사 첨삭

Hello BB. Thank you once again for this one. I agree with you, sleeping over at other\'s place is quite uncomfortable. There\'s no place like home.

- T. Beth

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I don\'t like to stay over at other people\'s house.
>>>>> CORRECT.   
Of course when i drunk seriously, i used to stay over at other people\'s house.
>>>>> Of course when I was seriously drunk, I used to stay over at other people\'s house.    

When i got up in the moring, i feel uncomfortable every thing.

>>>>> When I got up in the morning, I felt uncomfortable about everything.     
 This is the reason why I don\'t like to stay over at other people\'s house.
>>>>>  These are some reason why I don\'t like to stay over at other people\'s house. 
 First I don\'t have my wash tools and underwear.
>>>>>  First, I don\'t have my toiletries and underwear.  
Second I feel sorry to house owner.
>>>>>  Second, I feel sorry towards the house owner.  
But when my husband of friend\'s family are come to my house, they sometimes stay over at my home.

>>>>> But when my husband\'s friends\' family come to my house, they sometimes stay over.    

I don\'t care that. Because this is my home.

>>>>> I care less about that because it\'s my house.   

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