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Hello BB. Thank you once again for this one. I agree with you, sleeping over at other\'s place is quite uncomfortable. There\'s no place like home.
- T. Beth
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I don\'t like to stay over at other people\'s house.
>>>>> CORRECT.
Of course when i drunk seriously, i used to stay over at other people\'s house.
>>>>> Of course when I was seriously drunk, I used to stay over at other people\'s house.
When i got up in the moring, i feel uncomfortable every thing.
>>>>> When I got up in the morning, I felt uncomfortable about everything.
This is the reason why I don\'t like to stay over at other people\'s house.
>>>>> These are some reason why I don\'t like to stay over at other people\'s house.
First I don\'t have my wash tools and underwear.
>>>>> First, I don\'t have my toiletries and underwear.
Second I feel sorry to house owner.
>>>>> Second, I feel sorry towards the house owner.
But when my husband of friend\'s family are come to my house, they sometimes stay over at my home.
>>>>> But when my husband\'s friends\' family come to my house, they sometimes stay over.
I don\'t care that. Because this is my home.
>>>>> I care less about that because it\'s my house.
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