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2018-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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When somone's birthday or they buy the house or just they want to hang out,we stay over their's plcae. At that time they eat someting good food or have a wine or beer and they play together that they want to do.. In my case, when we stay over at other's people, we see a movie on internet or just talk about our daily life. I think after we grow up, what adult can do is very limitative.

강사 첨삭

Hello BB. Thank you for this. I agree with you, when we are adults we hang out rarely with friends. Well, not in all cases but for most people.  

- T. Beth

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When somone\'s birthday or they buy the house or just they want to hang out, we stay over their\'s plcae.
>>> When it\'s someone\'s birthday or they just bought a house or they just want to hang out, we stay over at their place.     
At that time they eat someting good food or have a wine or beer and they play together that they want to do..
>>>   At that time they eat something good or have wine or beer and they play together and do what they want to do.
In my case, when we stay over at other\'s people, we see a movie on internet or just talk about our daily life.
>>>  In my case, when we stay over at other people\'s place, we see a movie on the internet or just talk about our daily life.    
 I think after we grow up, what adult can do is very limitative.

>>>   I think after we grow up, what adult can do is very limited.     

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