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2018-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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In my case, I do it well. Of course there is a person that I was embarresed or too shy. But when I need do something or I wonder something, I ask it to some stranger. There was a boyfreind long time ago that when he wants to ask a person a question , he was very shy and he didn't ask any help. I didn't understand him . When we wonder about road, he didn't ask any person. And then , I asked to someone because to save the time.. Of course, nowadays because I'm madame , I also ask to a stranger better than before days

강사 첨삭

Hello BB. Thank you once again for this one. I agree with you. Asking for help is not something to be embarrassed about. You could never succeed in something if you don\'t ask for help.

- T. Beth

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In my case, I do it well.

>>>>  CORRECT.  

Of course there is a person that I was embarresed or too shy.
>>>>  Of course there is a person that I was embarrassed or too shy to ask.  

But when I need do something or I wonder something, I ask it to some stranger.
>>>>  But when I need to do something or I wonder about something, I ask it to some stranger.   
There was a boyfreind long time ago that when he wants to ask a person a question , he was very shy and he didn\'t ask any help.
>>>>   I had a boyfriend a long time ago who was very shy to ask other people whenever he needs help.  
I didn\'t understand him.

>>>> CORRECT.    

When we wonder about road, he didn\'t ask any person.

>>>> CORRECT.

>>>> OR: When we didn\'t know directions, he didn\'t ask anyone.     

And then , I asked to someone because to save the time.
>>>>  Then I ask someone to save time.   
Of course, nowadays because I\'m madame, I also ask to a stranger better than before days.

>>>>   Of course, now that I am a married woman, I also ask strangers better than in the past. 

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