bb's hw
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Hello BB. Thank you once again for this one. I agree with you. Asking for help is not something to be embarrassed about. You could never succeed in something if you don\'t ask for help.
- T. Beth
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In my case, I do it well.
>>>> CORRECT.
Of course there is a person that I was embarresed or too shy.
>>>> Of course there is a person that I was embarrassed or too shy to ask.
But when I need do something or I wonder something, I ask it to some stranger.
>>>> But when I need to do something or I wonder about something, I ask it to some stranger.
There was a boyfreind long time ago that when he wants to ask a person a question , he was very shy and he didn\'t ask any help.
>>>> I had a boyfriend a long time ago who was very shy to ask other people whenever he needs help.
I didn\'t understand him.
>>>> CORRECT.
When we wonder about road, he didn\'t ask any person.
>>>> CORRECT.
>>>> OR: When we didn\'t know directions, he didn\'t ask anyone.
And then , I asked to someone because to save the time.
>>>> Then I ask someone to save time.
Of course, nowadays because I\'m madame, I also ask to a stranger better than before days.
>>>> Of course, now that I am a married woman, I also ask strangers better than in the past.
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