Be a positive thinker!
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Thank you for your composition. You tried your best to express yourself well.
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T. Anne^^
\'Believe you will be successful and you will.’ Dale Carnegie said.
>>\"Believe that you will be successful and you will.\" Dale Carnegie said.
we should believe our potential ability so that we would able to come true.
>>We should believe our potential ability so that we will be successful someday.
It is the fastest way to gain goal.
>>It is the fastest way for us to attain our goals in life.
And the positive thinkers can acheive even impossible.
>>Positive thinkers can achieve even the impossible.
I was really motivated when I saw the game of Pyeongchang Paralympics.
>>CORRECT!
The disabled did not give up and they belived in themselves.
>>The disabled persons did not give up and they believed in themselves.
So they could join the game that the none-disabled did not try to easily.
>>They joined the game where the normal people could join even if it was difficult for them.
Let us be a positive thinkers!
>>Let us be positive thinkers.
We can do everything.
>>CORRECT!
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