Be a teacher

I'm going to be a teacher. Few days ago, I post my resume in website. And today, I've got a response from mother of a student. She want me to teach his son. Actually he will be my first student so I'm very exited. Also he is waiting for entrance to high school which I'm going to graduate. I'm happy not only for having my first job but being one student's mentor.

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for the composition that you sent. I can see that you already have 

improved on the use of the English language. You are a very smart and determined 

student and with constant practice you will do great. :D

T. Venus 

 

Here are my corrections for you:

I'm going to be a teacher.

>> CORRECT.

Few days ago, I post my resume in website.

>> A few days ago,I posted my resume on a website.

And today, I've got a response from mother of a student.

>> CORRECT.

She want me to teach his son.

>> She wants me to teach her son.

Actually he will be my first student so I'm very exited.

>> Actually, he will be my first student that's why I'm very excited.

Also he is waiting for entrance to high school which I'm going to graduate.

>>He is also about to enter into a high school of which I will be a graduate.

I'm happy not only for having my first job but being one student's mentor.

>>I'm happy not only for having my first job, but also for being a teacher to a student.