be concernd of the earthquake
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I heard on the news that a strong earthquake occurred in the Philippines, resulting in many deaths and injuries. I pray that everything is fine.
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Hi, Charlie^^
Thank you for sending this message. I appreciate it.
That\'s right. It was a really strong earthquake.
We didn\'t really feel it though in this city where I live.
It hit Cebu, which is a famous tourist destination.
It is where many people lost their lives.
_T. SHAY^^
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I heard on the news that a strong earthquake occurred in the Philippines, resulting in many deaths and injuries.
>>I heard on the news that a strong earthquake hit the Philippines, resulting in many deaths and injuries.
Thank you for sending this message. I appreciate it.
That\'s right. It was a really strong earthquake.
We didn\'t really feel it though in this city where I live.
It hit Cebu, which is a famous tourist destination.
It is where many people lost their lives.
_T. SHAY^^
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I heard on the news that a strong earthquake occurred in the Philippines, resulting in many deaths and injuries.
>>I heard on the news that a strong earthquake hit the Philippines, resulting in many deaths and injuries.
OR: The news reported a severe earthquake in the Philippines that caused a lot of deaths and injuries.
I pray that everything is fine.
>>Correct
OR: My thoughts and prayers are with everyone affected.
I pray that everything is fine.
>>Correct
OR: My thoughts and prayers are with everyone affected.
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