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2012-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Tomorrow is coming to me. August is already on me. But I am living in today. I'm still on July. I am left alone without passing of time. I don't want the wasting of time. For few days, I was totally out of mine. Firends was concerned about me. But I said 'Never mine.' I was okay. I am still okay. I will be also okay. I don't break eaily like no wheel's bike. It's not common song's lyrics. And these sentenses are mimic. I don't know what I am doing. I just want to write down something. I am sensitive tonight. The deepest dark makes night exclusive night. No topic in this stuff. Nothing in here. Frankly, I'm boring. So I'm writing down strangely enough like wheeping cream. Thank you. I have 2 writing :)

강사 첨삭

Hi! Are you really okay? kiki^^ Happy Wednesday :) I know that you are trying to do your best. Yehey ^_^ You did good but there are some corrections to be made. ^.^ T.Nica Tomorrow is coming to me. August is already on me.>> The next day is coming and it is already August. But I am living in today. I\'m still on July.>> But I am living today eventhough it\'s still July. I am left alone without passing of time.>> I was left alone without passing the time. I don\'t want the wasting of time.>> I dont want to waste time. For few days, I was totally out of mine.>>I was totally out of my mind for the past few days. Firends was concerned about me. But I said \'Never mine.\'>>My friends was concerned about me. But i told them \"Never mind.\" I was okay. I am still okay. I will be also okay.>> I was, still and will be okay. I don\'t break eaily like no wheel\'s bike.>>I don\'t break easily like no wheel\'s bike. It\'s not common song\'s lyrics.>> It is not a common lyrics of a song. And these sentenses are mimic.>>And these sentenses are already mimiced. I don\'t know what I am doing. >>Correct! I just want to write down something.>>Correct! I am sensitive tonight. >>Correct! The deepest dark makes night exclusive night.>> The darkness makes the night exclusive.No topic in this stuff. Nothing in here.>> There is no topic. Nothing in this stuff. Frankly, I\'m boring. So I\'m writing down strangely enough like wheeping cream.>>Frankly, I am bored, that is the reason why I am writing down strangely like a wheeping cream.Thank you. I have 2 writing :) >>Thank you. I have to write these. :)

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