Beach
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to the beach.
I saw many things.
I saw clab,fish,turtl
e and many things
I ate big clab.
It tasted great.
I went to hotel.
And have a good night.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Song!
Thank you for making your homework today! Teacher is happy that you had a great time during the weekend! Keep up the good work! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
1. I went to the beach.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I and my family spent some time on the beach.
2. I saw many things.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: A lot of things caught my eye.
3. I saw clab,fish,turtle and many things
>>I saw a crab, a fish, a turtle, and many other things.
4. I ate big clab.
>>I ate a big crab.
5. It tasted great.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: It was delicious.
6. I went to hotel And have a good night.
>>We went to the hotel and had a good night.
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