bears
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know what it means to protec bears. For whom?
The protection facility is like prison for bears . They are wild beasts.
They need nature for living not human made facilities.
I guess the reasons that the owners rasied bears are collecting the biles.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!
I am glad to know that you had an experience related to bears. My own thought, bear farming will stop if people stop buying traditional medicine that has a bear bile in it. Well, who would do that if they have witness a good effect by bear\'s bile to human body.
Human greed is incomparable.
Aki~
I don\'t know what it means to protec bears. For whom?
>>>I don\'t know what it means to protect bears from whom?
The protection facility is like prison for bears . They are wild beasts.
The protection facility is like prison for bears . They are wild beasts.
>>> CORRECT!
They need nature for living not human made facilities.
>>> CORRECT!
I guess the reasons that the owners rasied bears are collecting the biles.
They need nature for living not human made facilities.
>>> CORRECT!
I guess the reasons that the owners rasied bears are collecting the biles.
>>> I guess the reasons that the owners raised bears because they are collecting the bile.
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