Beat the Heat!

2020-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Theme: [Writing Exercise] Beat the heat! Name or enumerate three (3) ways to beat the heat this summer. One. Eating ice flake. I like eating green tea ice flake! : P Yum! Two. Open the fridge door. (You\'re mom will don\'t like it.) Three. Eat ice cream. I love green ice cream. Four. Take shower. With cold water! : ) Five. Drain and wash. I don\'t like it but my grandmother like it.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]! (^_^) Happy Tuesday!

There are many ways to beat the heat, but I think the most important is to keep yourself hydrated.

Drink lots of water/fluid. Also, avoid going out when it\'s very hot outside. :)

See you tomorrow!

__Teacher Mayleen :)

One. Eating ice flake.

>>> First, eat ice flakes.

I like eating green tea ice flake! : P Yum!

>>> I like eating green tea ice flakes because it\'s yummy!
Two. Open the fridge door. (You\'re mom will don\'t like it.)

Three. Eat ice cream.

>>> Second, eat ice cream though you\'re mom might not like it.

I love green ice cream.

>>> CORRECT

>>> OR: I love green tea ice cream.
Four. Take shower. With cold water! : )

>>> Third, take a shower with cold water!
Five. Drain and wash.

>>> Last, rinse and dry yourself using a clean towel.

I don\'t like it but my grandmother like it.

>>> I don\'t like it, but my grand mother likes it.

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