Beautiful place

Today, I took a English speaking test,so I went to jong ro. As you know, there are many place where have to visit in jong ro. First, 'In sa dong' is a good place to visit, because this place preserves korea traditions, so we can enjoy this. Especially, korean food and palace are the best things in 'in sa dong'. Second, there is a artificial river in the middle of jong ro which name is 'cheong gye chun'. Beautiful lights and clean roads make us feel good. specailly, when we go this place at night, we can enjoy more beautiful scene. Although there are many place where I want to suggest to you, at first,I want to you visit jong ro.

Hello [이름]! Wow!  It's so nice to hear about the place you visited.  I wish I would also try to go in that place.  I can imagine the beautiful scenery the place has to offer.  Monica   Today, I took a English speaking test,so I went to jong ro. >>>I went to Jong ro today and took an English speaking test.  As you know, there are many place where have to visit in jong ro. >>>As you know, there are many places to visit in Jong ro. First, 'In sa dong' is a good place to visit, because this place preserves korea traditions, so we can enjoy this. >>>First, "In sa dong" is a good place to visit because this place preserves Korean traditions so we can enjoy this. Especially, korean food and palace are the best things in 'in sa dong'. >>>correct Second, there is a artificial river in the middle of jong ro which name is 'cheong gye chun'. >>>correct  Beautiful lights and clean roads make us feel good. >>>correct specailly, when we go this place at night, we can enjoy more beautiful scene. >>>It is even more beautiful at night so it's more enjoyable to go there. Although there are many place where I want to suggest to you, at first,I want to you visit jong ro. >>>There are many places that I want to suggest for you to visit but I want you to visit Jong ro first.