Beauty
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Theme: [ESSAY] What is your own definition of the word \'beauty\'? Explain.
Beauty is...
1. Beautiful person is good but good characteristic person is greater.
2. You can\'t beg the |question looking the person\'s beautiful.
3. Good characteristic person can change anything but just beautiful person can\'t change anything.
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Hi Clair!
Here\'s your edited homework. See you on Wednesday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] What is your own definition of the word \'beauty\'? Explain.
Beauty is...
1. Beautiful person is good but good characteristic person is greater.
>> A beautiful person is good but someone with good character is greater.
2. You can\'t beg the question looking the person\'s beautiful.
>> You can\'t beg the question by looking at a person\'s beauty.
3. Good characteristic person can change anything but just beautiful person can\'t change anything.
>> A person with a good character can change anything but a person with just beauty can\'t change anything.
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