Beauty
학생이 쓴 원문
It is coming summer in my country now.
At this time, all nature looks very beautiful and refreshing.
It\'s beauty to me to see refresh trees and plants.
Nature gives me beauty and I also marvel at it.
You asked me if I could see beauty in the English language.
My answer is \'no\'.
Beauty can be seen when we have the room.
I can’t afford to feel beauty in the English language.
In other words, that means to not to be fluency in English.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
You are very insightful.
You have expressed your thoughts clearly and precisely.
I hope you will continue doing a good job.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It is coming summer in my country now.
>> In my country, summer is coming very soon.
At this time, all nature looks very beautiful and refreshing.
At this time, all nature looks very beautiful and refreshing.
>> At this time, nature looks very beautiful and refreshing.
It\'s beauty to me to see refresh trees and plants.
It\'s beauty to me to see refresh trees and plants.
>> It\'s beautiful for me to see fresh trees and plants.
Nature gives me beauty and I also marvel at it.
Nature gives me beauty and I also marvel at it.
>> Correct
You asked me if I could see beauty in the English language.
You asked me if I could see beauty in the English language.
>> Correct
My answer is \'no\'.
My answer is \'no\'.
>> Correct
Beauty can be seen when we have the room
Beauty can be seen when we have the room
>> Beauty can be seen when it is available.
I can’t afford to feel the beauty in the English language.
I can’t afford to feel the beauty in the English language.
>> I can’t feel the beauty in the English language.
In other words, that means to not to be fluency in English.
In other words, that means to not to be fluency in English.
>> In other words, that means not being fluent in English.
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