Beauty is same for everyone?

2018-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Beauty is same for everyone? my answer is no. First of all, if we look around, we can face many culture shocks. Usually, people think that thin women are beautiful but fat women are more beautiful in some African tribes. When brides of the tribes prepared to get married, they try to have a lot of food to be more beatutiful before marriage. Also standard of beauty is relative in same cultures. There are many beautiful actresses in Korea. They are popular and famous but some people say "oo is not that pretty, zz's nose is too long".. standard of beauty is very variable. For these reasons, I think beauty is not same for everyone.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^^

Thank you for writing this essay.

I loved it!!! :D

It is true that beauty is a very broad word and it varies in every country or culture.

I wonder what\'s your definition for the word, beauty? ^^
I\'m really curios and I\'m dying to know.
Anyway, I hope you\'re doing great.

See you in class later.
~Teacher Charry :)

Beauty is same for everyone?

>> Is beauty the same for everyone?

my answer is no.

>> My answer is no.
First of all, if we look around, we can face many culture shocks.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> First of all, if we observe around, we could get culture shocked.
Usually, people think that thin women are beautiful but fat women are more beautiful in some African tribes.

>> CORRECT!

When brides of the tribes prepared to get married, they try to have a lot of food to be more beatutiful before marriage.

>> CORRECT!
Also standard of beauty is relative in same cultures.

>> Also, the standard of beauty is relative in same cultures.

There are many beautiful actresses in Korea.

>> CORRECT!

They are popular and famous but some people say \"oo is not that pretty, zz\'s nose is too long\".. standard of beauty is very variable.

>> They are popular and famous but some people say, \"oo is not that pretty or zz\'s nose is too long\". The standard of beauty is very variable.
For these reasons, I think beauty is not same for everyone.

>> For these reasons, I think beauty is not the same for everyone. 

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