Beauty is same for everyone?
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It is true that beauty is a very broad word and it varies in every country or culture.
I wonder what\'s your definition for the word, beauty? ^^
I\'m really curios and I\'m dying to know.
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Beauty is same for everyone?
>> Is beauty the same for everyone?
my answer is no.
>> My answer is no.
First of all, if we look around, we can face many culture shocks.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> First of all, if we observe around, we could get culture shocked.
Usually, people think that thin women are beautiful but fat women are more beautiful in some African tribes.
>> CORRECT!
When brides of the tribes prepared to get married, they try to have a lot of food to be more beatutiful before marriage.
>> CORRECT!
Also standard of beauty is relative in same cultures.
>> Also, the standard of beauty is relative in same cultures.
There are many beautiful actresses in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
They are popular and famous but some people say \"oo is not that pretty, zz\'s nose is too long\".. standard of beauty is very variable.
>> They are popular and famous but some people say, \"oo is not that pretty or zz\'s nose is too long\". The standard of beauty is very variable.
For these reasons, I think beauty is not same for everyone.
>> For these reasons, I think beauty is not the same for everyone.
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