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It is only for rich person's culture. Actually It is not reasonable to change clothes every day because of other peoples eyes. To people who are not having many clothes, It is somekind of luxuries. In fashion society, It is rule to make clothes weakly so that people buy clothes more frequently. The rich want to spend their money to look them more attractive so they need fashion. And they want to specail item even though It is not suit them. In these days, fashion industy is getting make more clothe ever than before and make new clothes frequently which makes people feel their clothes out dated. Related fashion, commercail company and fashion magazines make people exposure to their product. Peopel tend to be follow other person's act or fashion, more and more giving exposure commmercial to people, more clothes will be bought by people. It is important to have a one's own fashion code, not to spend too much money on fashion.

Hi there [이름]! It\'s nice to meet you again here! I am really glad that you were able to spend time to write an essay. You are right! We should have our own sense of fashion. We will be unique and other people will like it too. Have a wonderfull evening. Talk to you soon! Teacher Nina   It is only for rich person\'s culture. >> Correct! Actually It is not reasonable to change clothes every day because of other peoples eyes. >> Correct! >> OR: Actually It is not reasonable to change clothes every day because of other peoples\' eyes.To people who are not having many clothes, It is somekind of luxuries. >> To people who are not having many clothes, it is somekind of luxury. In fashion society, It is rule to make clothes weakly so that people buy clothes more frequently. >> OR: In fashion, it is a rule to make clothes weekly so that people can purchase it more frequently.The rich want to spend their money to look them more attractive so they need fashion. >> The rich want to spend their money in order for them to look more attractive so they need fashionable clothes. And they want to specail item even though It is not suit them. >> And they want to have a special item even though it is not suitable for them.In these days, fashion industy is getting make more clothe ever than before and make new clothes frequently which makes people feel their clothes out dated. >> These days, fashion industry is making more clothes than before and they do it frequently which makes people feel that their clothing is out dated. Related fashion, commercail company and fashion magazines make people exposure to their product. >> Related to fashion, commercial companies and fashion magazines make people exposed to their product. Peopel tend to be follow other person\'s act or fashion, more and more giving exposure commmercial to people, more clothes will be bought by people. >> People tend to follow other person\'s action or fashion, more exposure for commerical companies, the more clothes will be bought by people. It is important to have a one\'s own fashion code, not to spend too much money on fashion. >> It is important to have our own fashion sense, not to spend too much money on it.