Because it's DELICIOUS!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
The reason why I like samgyupsal is same to answer why we like cheesecake.
We both know it's because they are both delicious.
Who feel upset when delicious foods are in their mouth?
Everyone loves tasty foods.
Though it feels like heaven when having flavorous food, I have to worry about the amount of calories I took afterward.
And that's a really sad thing.
Wow I'd like to eat samgyupsal. On a second thought, I should not. Because these days I'm trying to eat less. I think when I see tasty samgyupsal, my appetite will explode. Kaboom!!
And I was surprised that you like Korean foods.
Bye;)
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!!
I really love your sense of humor. :)
Listening to you in class and even when I\'m just reading your compositions
make me smile. haha! Thanks~~
Indeed, eating is a very pleasurable experience that brings more stress later.haha!
On the other hand, let\'s enjoy life and eat (in moderation) ..kkk
Have a nice day~~~
T.Kristel-
The reason why I like samgyupsal is same to answer why we like cheesecake.
>> The reason why I like samgyupsal is the same to the answer why we like cheesecake.
We both know it\'s because they are both delicious.
>> CORRECT!!Who feel upset when delicious foods are in their mouth?
>> CORRECT!!
Everyone loves tasty foods.>> CORRECT!!Though it feels like heaven when having flavorous food, I have to worry about the amount of calories I took afterward.
>> Though it feels like heaven when having flavorous food, I have to worry about the amount of calories I took afterwards.
And that\'s a really sad thing.>> CORRECT!!Wow I\'d like to eat samgyupsal. On a second thought, I should not. Because these days I\'m trying to eat less.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
I think when I see tasty samgyupsal, my appetite will explode. Kaboom!!>> CORRECT!!And I was surprised that you like Korean foods.>> CORRECT!!Bye;)
>> CORRECT!!
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