Because we are living in under democratic government.

2018-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

To do a voting is a important personal rights performing. If there is a governor, there must be ordinary people. Nowadays, I feel some tired. It must because of stress of studying english.. Give me a more cheer up... You are a native english speaker. I envy your mother tongue itself.. I am so hard to learning english... The feedback score scarcely don't advanced up .. Am I so feeble being? Anyway I finished my casting a vote. The rest is only now a my life which wil follow governors' will. English is felt to me too hard nowadays.. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!
Jean





To do a voting is a important personal rights performing.

>> Voting is an important exercise of a person\'s political rights.


 If there is a governor, there must be ordinary people.

>> If there is a governor, there must be an ordinary person.


 Nowadays, I feel some tired. It must because of stress of studying english.. Give me a more cheer up...

>> I feel quite tired nowadays. It must be due to the stress from studying English so please encourage me more.


 You are a native english speaker. I envy your mother tongue itself..

>> You are a native English speaker that\'s why I envy you for your mother tongue.


 I am so hard to learning english...

>> I\'m having such a hard time learning English.


 The feedback score scarcely don\'t advanced up .. Am I so feeble being?

>> The feedback score hardly improves. I wonder if I\'m a slow learner?


 Anyway I finished my casting a vote. The rest is only now a my life which wil follow governors\' will. 

>> Anyway, I cast my vote and the only thing left for me to do is to follow the policies of whoever\'s going to win. 


 English is felt to me too hard nowadays..

>> Learning the English language is giving me such a hard time nowadays.



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