Because we are living in under democratic government.
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To do a voting is a important personal rights performing.
>> Voting is an important exercise of a person\'s political rights.
If there is a governor, there must be ordinary people.
>> If there is a governor, there must be an ordinary person.
Nowadays, I feel some tired. It must because of stress of studying english.. Give me a more cheer up...
>> I feel quite tired nowadays. It must be due to the stress from studying English so please encourage me more.
You are a native english speaker. I envy your mother tongue itself..
>> You are a native English speaker that\'s why I envy you for your mother tongue.
I am so hard to learning english...
>> I\'m having such a hard time learning English.
The feedback score scarcely don\'t advanced up .. Am I so feeble being?
>> The feedback score hardly improves. I wonder if I\'m a slow learner?
Anyway I finished my casting a vote. The rest is only now a my life which wil follow governors\' will.
>> Anyway, I cast my vote and the only thing left for me to do is to follow the policies of whoever\'s going to win.
English is felt to me too hard nowadays..
>> Learning the English language is giving me such a hard time nowadays.
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