Becomimg a someone other than myself.

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Thank you so much for taking time in doing this activity and

for sharing your thoughts on this topic. 

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As you can see most of your sentences are correct, good job! 

I like the way you play with your words and come up with complex sentences.

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T. Glenda

If you will have to choose to become someone other than yourself, who
would it be and why?

 If possible, I would like to be a singer, especially, a tenor.

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That way, I could fully express my emotion with beautiful songs.
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As for me, expressing my own emotion is crucial to live a vivid life.

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These days, we are all living a busy and hectic lives, so we tend to overlook the inner ourselves.
>> lives (life), so we tend to overlook our inner self.
Furthermore, there are a lot of emotion labor in our society and my job is also a kind of emotion labor.

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However, it is rare to find a chance to express each emotions or emotional stress.
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In this sense, being a singer would be wonderful to express my self and live lively.

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