Becoming good

2022-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

학생이 쓴 원문

I usually try something what I like to do, not have to do. So I practice until I can do it well. I think the only way to be good at something is to practice repeatedly. It is necessary to patient. But I quit when I can do something well to a certain level because I’m not patient. So I don’t have something that I can do perfectly. Someday I’ll find something to keep doing without getting tired of.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]ny!

Thanks for answering the question for today. Kindly check the corrections so you will be able to be familiar with the patterns and try using the right ones. ^^

~T. Maine

I usually try something what I like to do, not have to do.

>> I usually try something that I like to do and not what I have to do.
So I practice until I can do it well.

>> Correct.
I think the only way to be good at something is to practice repeatedly.

>> Correct.
It is necessary to patient.

>> It is necessary to be patient.
But I quit when I can do something well to a certain level because I’m not patient.

>> Correct.
So I don’t have something that I can do perfectly.

>> Correct.
Someday I’ll find something to keep doing without getting tired of.

>> Someday, I\'ll find something to keep doing without getting tired of it.

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