Being a child
학생이 쓴 원문
I think being a child is better than being an adult.
It\'s because, if we being an adult, we should get a job to live ourselves.
Our parents would not take care of us anymore so we should live our own life.
And when we being a child, we can only play, eat and sleep.
Study and education is not important at that time.
Also, many adult tell us that being an adult is very hard so they want to be a child again.
Therefore, being a child is better than being an adult.
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I think being a child is better than being an adult.
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It\'s because, if we being an adult, we should get a job to live ourselves.
It\'s because, as adults, we have to get a job to support ourselves.
Our parents would not take care of us anymore so we should live our own life.
Our parents would not take care of us anymore so we should live our own life.
Our parents won\'t take care of us anymore, so we have to live our own lives.
And when we being a child, we can only play, eat and sleep.
And when we being a child, we can only play, eat and sleep.
When we were children, we could just play, eat, and sleep.
Study and education is not important at that time.
Study and education is not important at that time.
Study and education were not as important back then.
Also, many adult tell us that being an adult is very hard so they want to be a child again.
Also, many adults tell us that being an adult is very hard, and they wish they could be children again.
Therefore, being a child is better than being an adult.
Also, many adult tell us that being an adult is very hard so they want to be a child again.
Also, many adults tell us that being an adult is very hard, and they wish they could be children again.
Therefore, being a child is better than being an adult.
>>> CORRECT!!
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