Being a dentist!
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think being a dentist is a good job. Because dentists make a lot of money. Not only that, but they can see less scary scenes. That\'s why dentists can be said to be a good job.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Yes, I think being a dentist is a good job.
>>> CORRECT!
Because dentists make a lot of money.
>>> CORRECT!
Not only that, but they can see less scary scenes.
>>> CORRECT!
That\'s why dentists can be said to be a good job.
>>> CORRECT!
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