Being a photographer…
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I think being a photographer is an interesting job. Because I think photography is a way to express oneself. There are times when I look at a picture and I can see the heart of the photographer who took the picture. I think the job of a photographer is fun because I can express freedom of expression in a simple process.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Yes. I think being a photographer is an interesting job.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I think photography is a way to express oneself.
>>> CORRECT!
There are times when I look at a picture and I can see the heart of the photographer who took the picture.
>>> CORRECT!
I think the job of a photographer is fun because I can express freedom of expression in a simple process.
>>> CORRECT!
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