Being addicted to sports
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Why do you think some people are addicted to sports?
When we play the sport it feels fresh and we\'re getting the energy to live. Playing sports promotes endorphin and we are addicted to the hormone. Sports have victory and defeat, so we want to get the victory every time. Some sports have team play, so it strengthens fellowship when they practice and play. For these reasons, many people are addicted to sports.
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>> CORRECT.
Playing sports promotes endorphin and we are addicted to the hormone.
>> CORRECT.
Sports have victory and defeat, so we want to get the victory every time.
>> CORRECT.
Some sports have team play, so it strengthens fellowship when they practice and play.
>> CORRECT.
For these reasons, many people are addicted to sports.
>> CORRECT.
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