Being in a desert island.

2011-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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But at the same time , I have to choose either to live or to die. If I choose the latter one , it is simple. I have only to dive into sea. Since I don't know how to swim , I am gonna die soon. The other way, I will find out lots of things about the island. How big it is, What kind of food I get and Where I sleep and so on. And the most important fact is that I won't be able to last in that island for a long time. So I should find how to exit from that island. There are 2 ways to escape. The first, I put stones on the beach in SOS characther. So a plane or a ship can recognize me. The second way is that. Be prepared to fire. Put logs together where a ship can see Some day I can get out of this island.

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Wow my dear [이름], what a job well done! You did great in your composition, just keep up the good work.. T.Camille  But at the same time , I have to choose either to live or to die. >>correct!If I choose the latter one , it is simple. >>correct! I have only to dive into sea. >>correct!Since I don't know how to swim , I am gonna die soon. >>correct!The other way, I will find out lots of things about the island. >>The other wai is for me to find out lots of thing in the island.How big it is, What kind of food I get and Where I sleep and so on. >>correct!And the most important fact is that I won't be able to last in that island for a long time. >.correct!So I should find how to exit from that island. >>correct!There are 2 ways to escape. >>correct!The first, I put stones on the beach in SOS characther. >>First way is for me to put SOS characters on the sand using various stones.So a plane or a ship can recognize me. >>correct!The second way is that. >>correct!Be prepared to fire. >>Prepare to make a fire.Put logs together where a ship can see>>Put some logs to where a ship can see it.Some day I can get out of this island. >>correct!

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