Being in a desert island.
학생이 쓴 원문
But at the same time , I have to choose either to live or to die.
If I choose the latter one , it is simple.
I have only to dive into sea.
Since I don't know how to swim , I am gonna die soon.
The other way, I will find out lots of things about the island.
How big it is, What kind of food I get and Where I sleep and so on.
And the most important fact is that I won't be able to last in that island for a long time.
So I should find how to exit from that island.
There are 2 ways to escape.
The first, I put stones on the beach in SOS characther.
So a plane or a ship can recognize me.
The second way is that.
Be prepared to fire.
Put logs together where a ship can see
Some day I can get out of this island.
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T.Camille
But at the same time , I have to choose either to live or to die.
>>correct!If I choose the latter one , it is simple.
>>correct!
I have only to dive into sea.
>>correct!Since I don't know how to swim , I am gonna die soon.
>>correct!The other way, I will find out lots of things about the island.
>>The other wai is for me to find out lots of thing in the island.How big it is, What kind of food I get and Where I sleep and so on.
>>correct!And the most important fact is that I won't be able to last in that island for a long time.
>.correct!So I should find how to exit from that island.
>>correct!There are 2 ways to escape.
>>correct!The first, I put stones on the beach in SOS characther.
>>First way is for me to put SOS characters on the sand using various stones.So a plane or a ship can recognize me.
>>correct!The second way is that.
>>correct!Be prepared to fire.
>>Prepare to make a fire.Put logs together where a ship can see>>Put some logs to where a ship can see it.Some day I can get out of this island.
>>correct!
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