Being industrious
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think is the importance of being industrious?
I think constant mind is the importance of being industrious. It is hard to keep going constantly. I think that living busy is not industrious. Even though small work, doing it everyday needs industrious mind. It is important to keep it consistently and it will be the habit.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your answer to me.
I appreciate your viewpoint about being industrious.
I agree especially on the last part. If we\'ll keep it consistently, then definitely, it will become our habit.
And that will be really helpful to us. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I think a constant mind is important for being industrious.
It is hard to keep going constantly.
>> CORRECT.
I think that living busy is not industrious.
>> I think that living busily is not being industrious.
Even though small work, doing it everyday needs industrious mind.
>> Even though it is a small work, doing it everyday needs an industrious mind.
It is important to keep it consistently and it will be the habit.
>> CORRECT.
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