Being late for work.

2010-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 janel

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Definitely, being late isn't really good. Since I live near my company. I am usually not late for work. but last year, I was late about an hour. The day before that day, I set the alram for 5 a.m But when I woke up , it was 6:30 a.m I realized that I had set the alarm for 5 p.m I was so confused then. When I did first was to call the manager and tell him that I would be late He told me not to hurry. Though I was scolded by him later I think he was considerate.

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Hi there [이름]! Here are your corrections: -Teacher JM Definitely, being late isn't really good. >>>Correct. >>Better:  Naturally, being late isn't really good.Since I live near my company. >>>Since I live near my company,I am usually not late for work. >>>I am usually punctual for work.but last year, I was late about an hour. >>>Correct^^The day before that day, I set the alram for 5 a.m >>>The night before that day, I set the alarm to 5 a.mBut when I woke up , it was 6:30 a.m >>>But when I woke up the next morning, it was already 6:30 a.m!I realized that I had set the alarm for 5 p.m >>>I realized that I had set my alarm to 5 p.mI was so confused then. >>>Correct^^When I did first was to call the manager and tell him that  >>>What I first did was call my manager and tell him that I would be late>>>Correct^^He told me not to hurry. >>>Correct^^Though I was scolded by him later >>>Correct^^I think he was considerate. >>>Correct^^

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