Being presentable
학생이 쓴 원문
Being presentable to others is important because first impression is decided by appearance. I\'m not saying how the person is beautiful, i\'m saying how the person is tidy. Being tidy is the manners when we meet others. I saw the writing about being presentable that a singer wrote. Here is the writing and I will translate to you.
\'I\'m not a materialist, but i want to enjoy the life. Many people asked me why you don\'t do makeup, nail art, and dyeing. I don\'t adorn myself, but I see the mirror, comb the hair, and tidy myself before going out. Because it\'s comfortable. I know that everyone have different preference and seek different things. I respect, therefore, your preference. I like natural things and prefer my style. Although other people think me insufficient, i think myself precious. This is my opinion about beauty.\'
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Good afternoon, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your answer about this topic.
I like what you said as well as the singer\'s opinion about beauty and being presentable.
I agree with her. Thank you so much for sharing her writing. ^^
Have a wonderful day! See you later! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
I\'m not saying how the person is beautiful, I\'m saying how the person is tidy.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I\'m not talking about how beautiful the person is but how the person is tidy.
Being tidy is the manners when we meet others.
>> Being tidy is a manner when we meet others.
I saw the writing about being presentable that a singer wrote.
>> CORRECT.
Here is the writing and I will translate to you.
>> Here is the writing and I will translate it to you.
\'I\'m not a materialist, but i want to enjoy the life.
>> I\'m not a materialist, but I want to enjoy life.
Many people asked me why you don\'t do makeup, nail art, and dyeing.
>> Many people asked me why I don\'t do makeup, nail art, and dyeing.
I don\'t adorn myself, but I see the mirror, comb the hair, and tidy myself before going out.
>> I don\'t adorn myself, but I see the mirror, comb my hair, and tidy myself before going out.
Because it\'s comfortable.
>> CORRECT.
I know that everyone have different preference and seek different things.
>> I know that everyone has a different preference and seek different things.
I respect, therefore, your preference.
>> Therefore, I respect your preference.
I like natural things and prefer my style.
>> CORRECT.
Although other people think me insufficient, i think myself precious.
>> Although other people think of me as insufficient, I think of myself precious.
This is my opinion about beauty.\'
>> CORRECT.
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