being strict is good for working.
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I think being strict is good for working.
Wariness is creating when a boss is strict.
It is necessary to work.
Subordinates become lazy, If a boss has only warm heart.
Actually, I read the book titled " Bad Boss"
In the book, Bad boss means the person who has good ability in working and who is strict.
If not, organization might be collapsed.
Like strong wind makes tree harder, Like cold weather makes flower bloom,
Bad boss is necessary for you to grow up.
I think so but my boss is seems like that.
so I always carefully talk to him.
When I should make a report, I check it one more time because of him.
Sometimes he is annoying to our coworker including me,
Not because of his hot temper, not becase of complexity of his tasks
because of our imperfect report.
So I understand the "Bad boss"
Of course being strict is helpful for organization.
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I think being strict is good for working.
>> I think being strict is good when working. Wariness is creating when a boss is strict.
>> Wariness is created when a boss is strict. It is necessary to work.
>> Correct! Subordinates become lazy, If a boss has only warm heart.
>> Subordinates become lazy if the boss has only a warm heart.
>> OR: Subordinates become lazy of the boss is very lenient. Actually, I read the book titled \" Bad Boss\"
>> Correct! In the book, Bad boss means the person who has good ability in working and who is strict.
>> According to the book, \"bad boss\" means a person who has a good ability at work and strict.If not, organization might be collapsed.
>> If not, the organization might collapse.
>> OR: If not the vision of the organization might fail.Like strong wind makes tree harder,
>> Like a strong wind makes a tree harder,
Like cold weather makes flower bloom,
>> Correct! Bad boss is necessary for you to grow up.
>> Correct! I think so but my boss is seems like that.
>> I think my boss seems so I always carefully talk to him.
>> So I am always careful when I talk to him. When I should make a report, I check it one more time because of him.
>> When I should make a report, I usually check it again because of him.
Sometimes he is annoying to our coworker including me,
>> Did you mean: He is sometimes annoying.>> OR: We are sometimes annoyed because of him. Not because of his hot temper, not becase of complexity of his tasks because of our imperfect report.>> It is not because he is hot tempered, not because of the complexity of his tasks but of our imperfect report.
So I understand the \"Bad boss\"
>> Correct! Of course being strict is helpful for organization.
>> Correct!
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