Belief

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I believe that whatever you think will happen.

In addition, whatever you say will happen.

Therefore, we should only think and speak positively.

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Belief can move mountains, supply infinite powers and make dreams come true.

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If we pile up belief and faith, it can make a rule that follow action.

>> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: If we pile up beliefs and faith, they can make a rule that we follow by actions.

>> OR: If we pile up beliefs and faith, they can make a rule that our actions follow.

When Carnegie was on the radio show, the MC asked him what was the best lesson you have learned.

>> When Carnegie was on the radio show, the MC asked him about the best lesson he have learned.

>> OR: When Carnegie was on the radio show, the MC asked him, \"What was the best lesson he have learned?\"

Carnegie answered \" Knowing what we think is important, because if we know what we think, we could recognize what we are, and what we think can make us.\" 

>> Carnegie answered, \"Knowing what we think is important, because if we know what we think, we could recognize what we are, and what we think can make us.\"

We can change our lives by changing our thoughts.

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Namely, if we think of happiness, we can be happy, if we think of misery, we can be unhappy, and if we think of failure, we can be failed.

>> Namely, if we think of happiness, we can be happy. If we think of misery, we can be unhappy. And, if we think of failure, we can fail.

>> OR: Namely, if we think of happiness, we can be happy. If we think of misery, we can be unhappy. Furthermore, if we think of failure, we can fail.

Everything can be determined by one\'s thought and mind.

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