Benefits of self driving cars
학생이 쓴 원문
First, self driving cars are safer than hnman driving cars. They can reduce accidents by humans. Actually, many researches show that they have improved safety compared to human driving cars. They also have increased accessibility for poor drivers, elderly people, and handicapped people. And they will reduce stress of driving. So those who ride them feel comfortable and enjoy riding.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Actually, I still have reservations about self-driving cars because of safety concerns, but I also agree that current technology is improving, so it has fewer errors than before. Hopefully, this kind of technology will be very beneficial for everyone.
- T. Caitlyn
First, self driving cars are safer than hnman driving cars.
>> First, self-driving cars are safer than human-driven cars.
They can reduce accidents by humans.
>> They can reduce accidents caused by humans.
Actually, many researches show that they have improved safety compared to human driving cars.
>> Actually, many research studies show that they have improved safety compared to human-driven cars.
They also have increased accessibility for poor drivers, elderly people, and handicapped people.
>> They have also increased accessibility for low-income people, elderly people, and people with disabilities.
And they will reduce stress of driving.
>> They will also reduce the stress of driving.
So those who ride them feel comfortable and enjoy riding.
>> So, those who use them feel comfortable and enjoy the ride.
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