benefits of the transport.
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I prefer to use transport than driving my car when I move to the other city.
of course driving car is more convenient However I can use my phone during the transport.
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Hi, Sir Thomas!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I prefer to use transport than driving my car when I move to the other city.
>> I prefer to use transport than driving my car when I move to another city.
of course driving car is more convenient However I can use my phone during the transport.
>> Of course, driving car is more convenient, however I can\'t use my phone while driving.
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