benefits of working in a team

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1. there are a lot of benefits of working in a team.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>Working in a team can be very beneficial.
2. first we can complement ability that we lake.

>>>First, we can complement each others\' skills.
3. for example, i am good at searching information and categorizing it my other team member is good at making a presentation using it so we shared role and could got high score in a class.

>>>For example, I am good at searching for information and categorizing it while my team member is good at making presentations using the information I gathered. Here, we shared roles and could get a high grade in class.
4. seceond, we can find better way to achive goal during sharing opinion.

>>>Second, we can find better ways to achieve our goals by sharing our opinions.
5. if we just do project alone, then we would do it as same way we always do. so we can learn new solution from other members.
 >>>If we just do the project on our own, then we would do it the same way we always do so working in a team would help us learn new solutions. 
6. third we can reduce the time. or we can make more perfect during the smae thime.

>>>Third, we can reduce the time to finish the project and at the same time make the quality better.
7. so, woring in a team is more efficient than working on my own.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>Therefore, working in a team can be more beneficial compared to working individually.