Besides animals, what do you fear the most in life?

2020-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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I am afraid of height. When I tried to do bunjee-jumping in a ceratin place, I felt fear to jump that height. Also I can\'t ride a rides at amusement park in Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
TGIF! Thanks for answering the homework despite your busyness. ^ ^ Enjoy your weekend!
-Rachel
I am afraid of height. 
>> I\'m afraid of heights. 
When I tried to do bunjee-jumping in a ceratin place, I felt fear to jump that height. 
>> When I tried bungee-jumping in a certain place, I was scared to jump from that height. 
>> I tried to do bungee-jumping before, but I felt fear jumping from the height. 
Also I can\'t ride a rides at amusement park in Korea.
>> Also, I can\'t take rides in amusement parks in Korea.

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