Best ages
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the best age is in my 20s.
I think it\'s a good time to try something new.
While attending school, I learn a lot of information and develop my thoughts.
When you turn 20, you will be able to plan and implement what you have in mind.
I think it\'s best to be in your 20s when you can experience a lot of new things.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Hailey! ^^
I definitely agree with your opinion.
Thank you for this composition~
- T. Rina
1. I think the best age is in my 20s.
>> CORRECT!
2. I think it\'s a good time to try something new.
>> CORRECT!
2. I think it\'s a good time to try something new.
>> CORRECT!
3. While attending school, I learn a lot of information and develop my thoughts.
>> CORRECT!
4. When you turn 20, you will be able to plan and implement what you have in mind.
>> CORRECT!
5. I think it\'s best to be in your 20s when you can experience a lot of new things.
5. I think it\'s best to be in your 20s when you can experience a lot of new things.
>> CORRECT!
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