Best and Worst trips!
학생이 쓴 원문
Both the best and worst trips I\'ve been on have been to Vietnam. The fruits I ate in Vietnam were really delicious, and the price of goods in Vietnam was lower than in Korea, so I was able to buy and eat a lot at a relatively cheap price. However, there were too many motorcycles on the roads in Vietnam, so I was afraid, and the lime content of the water was different from that in Korea, so it was a bit inconvenient. But there were more good things than bad things.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Both the best and worst trips I\'ve been on have been to Vietnam.
>>> The best and worst trip I\'ve been to was in Vietnam.
The fruits I ate in Vietnam were really delicious, and the price of goods in Vietnam was lower than in Korea, so I could buy and eat a lot at a relatively cheap price.
>>> The fruits I ate in Vietnam were really delicious, and the price of goods in Vietnam was lower than in Korea, so I was able to buy and eat a lot at a relatively low price.
However, there were too many motorcycles on the roads in Vietnam, so I was afraid, and the lime content of the water was different from that in Korea, so it was a bit inconvenient.
>>> However, there are too many motorcycles on the roads of Vietnam, so I was afraid to cross, and the lime content of the water was different from Korea, so it was a bit inconvenient.
But there were more good things than bad things.
>>> CORRECT!
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