Best friend?

2016-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Friend is the people whom I spend a much time with and I have similiar emotion with. Friend can be a man or women or old person. Some married people says that husband or wife is their best friend. That might be the reason that married couples known well their husband and wife. Because married couples spend all time his(or her) wife(or husband). Sometimes they share emotion, sometime fight between husband and wife. Lovers' quarrels are soon mended. All the while they raised more really affection together. It is a proverb that friend is someone whom spend a much time with together. Nobody spend much time as man and wife. But they get tired of each other because the couple spend too much time together. To overcome a tire and to make a shared emotion and to understand ecah other, that it the best friend. I think.

강사 첨삭

Hello sir [이름],

A very good composition once again sir. I agree with you. You\'ve been married for such a long time and I\'m not even married so I don\'t dare to disagree with you (kidding). Have a wonderful weekend and I\'ll see you again on Monday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Friend is the people whom I spend a much time with and I have similiar emotion with.

>>A friend is the person whom I spend so much time with and I have similar emotions with.

Friend can be a man or women or old person.

>>A friend can be a man or a woman or an old person.

Some married people says that husband or wife is their best friend.

>>Some married people say that their husband or wife is their best friend.

That might be the reason that married couples known well their husband and wife.

>>That might be the reason why married couples know well their husband or wife.

Because married couples spend all time his(or her) wife(or husband).

>>Because married couples spend most of their time together.

Sometimes they share emotion, sometime fight between husband and wife.

>>Sometimes, they share their feelings, sometimes they fight.

Lovers\' quarrels are soon mended.

>>correct!

All the while they raised more really affection together.

>>After a while, they are more affectionate with each other.

It is a proverb that friend is someone whom spend a much time with together.

>>There is a proverb that says, \"A friend is someone whom you spend so much time with\".

Nobody spend much time as man and wife.

>>Nobody spend much time together as man and wife.

But they get tired of each other because the couple spend too much time together.

>>But they can get tired of each other also because the couple spend too much time together.

To overcome a tire and to make a shared emotion and to understand ecah other, that it the best friend. I think.

>>To overcome this and to be able to share your emotions and to understand each other, that it the real best friend. I think.

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