Best friend?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello sir [이름],
A very good composition once again sir. I agree with you. You\'ve been married for such a long time and I\'m not even married so I don\'t dare to disagree with you (kidding). Have a wonderful weekend and I\'ll see you again on Monday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Friend is the people whom I spend a much time with and I have similiar emotion with.
>>A friend is the person whom I spend so much time with and I have similar emotions with.
Friend can be a man or women or old person.
>>A friend can be a man or a woman or an old person.
Some married people says that husband or wife is their best friend.
>>Some married people say that their husband or wife is their best friend.
That might be the reason that married couples known well their husband and wife.
>>That might be the reason why married couples know well their husband or wife.
Because married couples spend all time his(or her) wife(or husband).
>>Because married couples spend most of their time together.
Sometimes they share emotion, sometime fight between husband and wife.
>>Sometimes, they share their feelings, sometimes they fight.
Lovers\' quarrels are soon mended.
>>correct!
All the while they raised more really affection together.
>>After a while, they are more affectionate with each other.
It is a proverb that friend is someone whom spend a much time with together.
>>There is a proverb that says, \"A friend is someone whom you spend so much time with\".
Nobody spend much time as man and wife.
>>Nobody spend much time together as man and wife.
But they get tired of each other because the couple spend too much time together.
>>But they can get tired of each other also because the couple spend too much time together.
To overcome a tire and to make a shared emotion and to understand ecah other, that it the best friend. I think.
>>To overcome this and to be able to share your emotions and to understand each other, that it the real best friend. I think.
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