best gifts

2013-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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The electric razor, the branded T-shirt, and the document bag are the stuff that I still remember as the best gifts I received. I received them from my girlfriend about 20 years ago when we were dating. Of these gifts, I'm still using the razor and I occasionally think of her when I hold the razor.She was so kind, calm, pure and had a warm heart. The best gift is not an expensive item to me, but the thing I could feel giver's love towards me.I was delighted and also felt sorry when I received them because she kept giving me too much. It was uncomfortable for me to receive them. I felt I had to give something to her as well. But when you are dating someone, there are many cases that couples do not love each other equally. There is always a discrepancy. The degree of love is not absolutely equal, neither is an absolute condition for a relationship to last longer. He/she could love you more than you love him/her, so he/she tends to be dedicated in some ways like giving gifts thanyouare.

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Good evening again Sir [이름]! Wow! I think she\'s really a sweet person! I do agree with you. The feelings are not always mutual. Thank you so much for sharing personal matters, I really appreciate it a lot. You made my night! Tell me more about your gifts in class. What was the most special gift you\'ve ever given to someone? See you! Teacher Nina The electric razor, the branded T-shirt, and the document bag are the stuff that I still remember as the best gifts I received. >> Correct! (Check: stuffs ^^) >> OR: The best gifts that I received are the electric razor. the branded shirt, and the file case. I received them from my girlfriend about 20 years ago when we were dating. >> Correct! >> OR: I received them from my girlfriend about twenty years ago when we were still dating. Of these gifts, I\'m still using the razor and I occasionally think of her when I hold the razor. >> Among the gifts I mentioned, I am still using the razor and I occasionally think of her when I hold it. She was so kind, calm, pure and had a warm heart. >> She was so kind, calm, pure and warm-hearted person. The best gift is not an expensive item to me, but the thing I could feel giver\'s love towards me. >> The best gift is not an expensive item, but the thing is that I could feel the love of the giver. >> OR: The best gift is not how expensive the item is, but it\'s the thought that counts. I was delighted and also felt sorry when I received them because she kept giving me too much. >> Correct! >> OR: I was delighted and also sorry when I received them because she kept on giving me a lot of things. It was uncomfortable for me to receive them. >> Correct! I felt I had to give something to her as well. >> Correct! >> OR: I felt I had to give something in return. But when you are dating someone, there are many cases that couples do not love each other equally. >> Correct! >> OR: But when you are still dating someone, there are a lot of cases that the feelings of the couples are not mutual. There is always a discrepancy. >> Correct! The degree of love is not absolutely equal, neither is an absolute condition for a relationship to last longer. >> The degree of love is not absolutely equal, neither it is an absolute condition for a relationship to last long. He/she could love you more than you love him/her, so he/she tends to be dedicated in some ways like giving gifts thanyouare. >> He/she could love you more than you love him/her, so he/she tends to be dedicated in some ways like giving gifts than you do.

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