best part
학생이 쓴 원문
of course, my son came back home safely
it easy to get an accident in the army
I actually worried about him
fortunately, there were not a big problem
강사 첨삭
HAPPY TUESDAY!
Thank you so much,Mrs. [Name] for doing your homework today.
Thank God no casualties happened to your son when he was in the army.
Talk to you in class very soon!
Have a blessed day.
~Teacher Eve.
of course, my son came back home safely
>> Correct!
it easy to get an accident in the army
>> It\'s easy to get an accident in the army.
I actually worried about him
>> I was actually worried about him.
fortunately, there were not a big problem
>> Correct!
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