Best piece of advice
학생이 쓴 원문
If someone is concerned about gaining weight or intestine problems such as digestion. I want to give a suggestion of practicing time-restricted diets or intermittent fasting. Actually many studies show that time-restricted diet is one of the effective ways to lose weight. And it also helps to improve stomach problems. I have practiced that kind of diet, although not in a perfect way. It is good in managing my weight and improving my digestion and constipation.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I think your advice is very helpful, especially considering that nowadays, the case of obesity is increasing and a lot of people have gained weight, particularly during the pandemic when we were not able to do anything but stay at home and eat. I believe it requires a lot of determination and discipline to maintain a routine regarding intermittent fasting.
- T. Caitlyn
If someone is concerned about gaining weight or intestine problems such as digestion.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: If someone is concerned about gaining weight or experiencing intestinal problems, such as digestion issues.
I want to give a suggestion of practicing time-restricted diets or intermittent fasting.
>> I want to suggest practicing time-restricted diets or intermittent fasting.
Actually many studies show that a time-restricted diet is one of the effective ways to lose weight.
>> CORRECT
And it also helps to improve stomach problems.
>> CORRECT
I have practiced that kind of diet, although not in a perfect way.
>> CORRECT
It is good in managing my weight and improving my digestion and constipation.
>> It is good for managing my weight and improving my digestion, as well as alleviating constipation.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.