Best teachers! parents!

2013-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

학생이 쓴 원문

There are many great teachers who are trained at professional organisations such as univercities and education centers. However, I believe that parents are the best teachers to children. there are several reasons why parents are the best teachers to children. First, they know about their children the most so they can educate their children depending on the charater. For example, they recognize the strength and the weakness for their children. therefore, they can enhance what the child do well. In addition, parents can give some helpful advice which other people could not do due to the concern about crossing the line. last, school teachers teach foucing on the knowlege ; math, language, science, history. in contract, parents discipline what are right and wrong in their life. To sum up, parents are ones who love chilren the most in the world. They care their children more than any other people. therefore Ithink that parents are the best teachers to the kids.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for doing this essay. I enjoyed reading it because you have great ideas to share with me. Perhaps people should realize the same thought you have in mind about the role of parents. Anyway, please check my corrections below. be mindful of your prepositions too. Nonetheless, good job on your composition! Teacher Jenny There are many great teachers who are trained at professional organisations such as univercities and education centers. >> There are many teachers who were trained in professional organizations or institutions such as universities and education centers. However, I believe that parents are the best teachers to children. there are several reasons why parents are the best teachers to children. >> However, I believe that parents are still the best teachers of children. There are several reasons why parents are the best teachers to children.  First, they know about their children the most so they can educate their children depending on the charater. >>  First, they know their children the most therefore they can educate their children depending on the child\'s personality or character.  For example, they recognize the strength and the weakness for their children. >> Correct  therefore, they can enhance what the child do well. >> Thus, the parents can enhance what the child does well.  In addition, parents can give some helpful advice which other people could not do due to the concern about crossing the line. >>In addition, parents can advise their children which other people can\'t do due to the perception of crossing the line. last, school teachers teach foucing on the knowlege ; math, language, science, history. in contract, parents discipline what are right and wrong in their life. >> Lastly, school teachers focus on developing the intellect of a student while parents are the ones who develop the child\'s capability of choosing between right from wrong.To sum up, parents are ones who love chilren the most in the world. >> Correct  They care their children more than any other people. therefore Ithink that parents are the best teachers to the kids. >> They care about their children more than any other people so I think parents are the best teachers of children.

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