Best thing of birthplace
학생이 쓴 원문
My birthplace best thing is that is country
beautiful, so green, with fresh air and quiet.
When I was young, I every morning wake up with sound of birth.
now I miss that everything.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ethan!
This is a very good description of your hometown. It feels very peaceful and serene in this place according to your description. I hope that you can go there again and visit soon.
Well done on your homework! Kindly go over some of my suggestions to make your sentences even more complete.
See you in class tomorrow! Keep up the good work!
-T. Donna =)
beautiful, so green, with fresh air and quiet.
>> My birthplace\'s best thing is that it is in the countryside
and it\'s beautiful, so green, with fresh air, and quiet.
When I was young, I every morning wake up with sound of birth.
now I miss that everything.
and it\'s beautiful, so green, with fresh air, and quiet.
When I was young, I every morning wake up with sound of birth.
now I miss that everything.
>> When I was young, I every wake up morning with sounds of birds.
Now I miss everything.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.