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2020-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

학생이 쓴 원문

Most people are likely to get together on holidays and on weekends. We are all busy during the week. It`s easy to get together on the weekends. Family members can schedule each other anytime. But friends should be more punctual with each other. I miss the old days. We use to go to our neighbor`s house and eat and sleep. Now I think I`m going to be an outcast if I do it`s like this.

강사 첨삭

Good day Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework. You did great and I can see a lot of improvements from you. Keep up the good work so you will be able to master English in no time. Have a great day! See you in class! T. Jasper

Here are your corrections:

Most people are likely to get together on holidays and on weekends.
>> CORRECT

We are all busy during the week.
>> CORRECT

It`s easy to get together on the weekends.
>> It\'s easier to get together on weekends.

Family members can schedule each other anytime.
>> The family members can schedule their get together anytime.

But friends should be more punctual with each other.
>> But, get together with friends should be on time.

I miss the old days.
>> CORRECT

We use to go to our neighbor`s house and eat and sleep.
>> We used to go to our neighbor\'s house to eat and sleep.

Now I think I`m going to be an outcast if I do it`s like this.
>> Now, I think I will become an outcast if I do it.

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