Best travel
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My best travel was the trip to Singapore. I had the trip on last year December, and it was the last abroad trip. The reason why I like the trip is I got so impressed that I became to dream living in the Singapore. Because, I like the country’s nature, facilities, and culture. And I also met my dad’s friend and his daughters in the Singapore, I thought that their life is better than that of Korean students.
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Hi, Jacob!
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~ T. Camille
My best travel was the trip to Singapore.
>> My best travel experience was the trip to Singapore.
I had the trip on last year December, and it was the last abroad trip.
>> I had the trip last year in December, and it was our last trip abroad.
The reason why I like the trip is I got so impressed that I became to dream living in the Singapore.
>> The reason why I like the trip is I got so impressed that I started dreaming of living in the Singapore.
Because, I like the country’s nature, facilities, and culture.
Because, I like the country’s nature, facilities, and culture.
>> CORRECT!
And I also met my dad’s friend and his daughters in the Singapore, I thought that their life is better than that of Korean students.
And I also met my dad’s friend and his daughters in the Singapore, I thought that their life is better than that of Korean students.
>> And I also met my dad’s friend and his daughters in Singapore, I thought that their life is better than that of Korean students.
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