better driver

2020-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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In many experiments, the man is the better driver. There are big differences in motor nerves. When men and women park the parking time was three times different. However, driving too fast, driving too recklessly.....women are more careful about these things. It may vary depending on each individual`s personality except for gender. men can be better at driving. But I think it`s a woman who follows the rules.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]~
Thank you for doing your homework. Thank you for always trying. Keep it up. See you in class later. 

Here are your corrections:

In many experiments, the man is the better driver.
>> Studies show that men are better at driving than women.

There are big differences in motor nerves.
>> CORRECT

When men and women park the parking time was three times different.
>> When men and women will park at the same time, their speed in parking was thrice the difference.

However, driving too fast, driving too recklessly.....women are more careful about these things.
>> However, men drive too fast and recklessly while women are more careful about these things.

It may vary depending on each individual`s personality except for gender.
>> CORRECT

men can be better at driving.
>> CORRECT

But I think it`s a woman who follows the rules.
>> But I think women generally follows the rules.

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