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2021-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Absolutely, real-life listening is better than listening activities in the classroom. I think that all education should be practiced in real-life. Learning in the classroom is the second thing we can do when we can\'t learn in real-life. Maybe, it is same way to learn English. I will be better at English when I live with people who take advantage of English.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!
Thank you for finishing your homework early.
I look forward to discussing this topic with you.
I\'ll see you on Thursday!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Absolutely, real-life listening is better than listening activities in the classroom.
>> Correct
I think that all education should be practiced in real-life.
>> I think that all kinds of education should be practiced in real life.
Learning in the classroom is the second thing we can do when we can\'t learn in real-life.
>> Learning in the classroom is the second thing we can do when we can\'t learn something in real life.
Maybe, it is same way to learn English.
>> Maybe, it\'s the same way in learning English.
I will be better at English when I live with people who take advantage of English.
>> I will be better at English when I live with people who always speak in English.

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