between mediation and worry, and comparison

2013-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Dear [Name] are difference between mediation and worry, and comparison based on Rick Warren, author, The Purpose Driven Life. The below is not from my composition. Hope it is helpful to your spiritual life.^^ Mediation and Worry. When you think about a problem over and over in your mind, that’s called worry. When you think about God’s Word over and over in your mind, that’s meditation. If you know how to worry, you already know how to mediate! You just need to switch your attention from your problems to Bible verses. The more you meditate on God’s Word, the less you will have to worry about. Two bad results from comparing oneself with others. You will always be able to find someone who seems to be doing a better job than you and you will become discouraged. Or you will always be able to find someone who doesn’t seems as effective as you and you will get full of pride. Either attitude will take you out of service and rob you of your joy.

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Hello David, Thank you for this. Yes, this is a big help for my spiritual life. I\'ll try to secure a copy of Rick Warren\'s book. You\'ve a great day ahead. T. Leny   Dear [Name], >>CORRECTThese are difference between mediation and worry, and comparison based on Rick Warren, author, The Purpose Driven Life. >>These are the differences between meditation, worry and comparison of oneself to others based on Rick Warren, the author of The Purpose Driven Life. The below is not from my composition. >>CORRECT Hope it is helpful to your spiritual life.^^ >>CORRECT >>I hope this will be helpful to your spiritual life.Mediation and Worry.When you think about a problem over and over in your mind, that’s called worry. >>CORRECT When you think about God’s Word over and over in your mind, that’s meditation. >>CORRECT If you know how to worry, you already know how to meditate! >>CORRECT You just need to switch your attention from your problems to Bible verses. >>CORRECT The more you meditate on God’s Word, the less you will have to worry about. >>CORRECTTwo bad results from comparing oneself with others. >>CORRECTYou will always be able to find someone who seems to be doing a better job than you and you will become discouraged. >>CORRECT Or you will always be able to find someone who doesn’t seems as effective as you and you will get full of pride. >>CORRECT Either attitude will take you out of service and rob you of your joy. >>CORRECT

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