Between work and leisure
학생이 쓴 원문
I make effort to divide my time effectively. I go to the academy to prepare for a job. I make portfolios at the academy. After class, I spend time at home. I usually watch TV programs. Sometimes, I play a computer game. This is how I divide my time effectively between work and leisure.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Justin. Good job in making your sentences. You\'re improving day by day. Keep up the good work and see you in class!
-T. Julia
I make effort to divide my time effectively.
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OR >> I make an effort to manage my time effectively.
I go to the academy to prepare for a job.
>> Correct
I make portfolios at the academy.
>> Correct
After class, I spend time at home.
>> Correct
I usually watch TV programs.
>> Correct
Sometimes, I play a computer game.
>> Correct
This is how I divide my time effectively between work and leisure.
>> Correct
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