Bewitched (book summary)

2012-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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For reason of her last exam to become a fairy godmother, Wanda was to turn the first animal she saw into something else. Accidently, the exact first animal Wanda ran into was Charley, a frog, therefore she changed him into a prince. However Charley required Wanda to change him back, but Wanda put the opposite spell out of her mind. To make Charley joyful, Wanda swung her wand, and a castle turned up. Wanda said now Charley could sing and dance and snap his fingers. However he didn't want to do something as funny as snapping his fingers, and this reminded Wanda of the reverse charm. When Wanda cracked her fingers, Charley turned back into a frog again, and that made him happy. The principal drew a conclusion that thinking about others was the most essential thing of fairy godmothers. Finally, Wanda became a fairy godmother.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear! Thank you again for another wonderful book summary. Very good job you did on wrting nsomething about Bewitched..:) I hope I can read the whole story of this book because it seems interesting. Do you believe in witchcraft? Do you think witches really exist? Anyway, here are the corrections I made on your sentences. See you later!! --xoxoTeacher Camille ^^ --- For reason of her last exam to become a fairy godmother, Wanda was to turn the first animal she saw into something else. >>For her final test to become a fairy godmother, Wanda has to turn the first animal she sees into something else. Accidently, the exact first animal Wanda ran into was Charley, a frog, therefore she changed him into a prince.  >>Accidentally, the first animal she ran into was Charley, a frog. Therefore she turned him into a prince. However Charley required Wanda to change him back, but Wanda put the opposite spell out of her mind. >>Correct.  To make Charley joyful, Wanda swung her wand, and a castle turned up. >>Correct. Wanda said now Charley could sing and dance and snap his fingers. >>Wanda asked Charley to sing and dance while snapping his fingers. However he didn\'t want to do something as funny as snapping his fingers, and this reminded Wanda of the reverse charm. >>Correct. When Wanda cracked her fingers, Charley turned back into a frog again, and that made him happy. >>Correct. The principal drew a conclusion that thinking about others was the most essential thing of fairy godmothers. >>Correct. Finally, Wanda became a fairy godmother. >>Correct. 

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